weird pitch drop at 0:38-0:40 :/
other than that not too bad, 3/5 6/10
kinda basic, not too much to it, sounds like sytrus strings and basic sounds. try upgrading your library and making something creative/yourself!
haha nice call.....i did use sytrus strings:)
Also the "pitch drop" ur referring to is actually my attempt to make it seem like a "Disk-off and Disk on" sorta thing....
haha idk.....i thought it would be cool?:)
thanks for ur review:D
i'll give it that
Well... thanks? If that's all I've got, at least I've got something I suppose.
But I have to say this is a pretty useless review. You just 7'nd it and didn't even say why. I'll just have to take a guess and say it's because I have a 7 in my name.
intro is unique, fades in quite well to the main riffs. and has an overall nice sound. i would improve the bassline though and the filter for when the bass comes in.
other than that, nice, oh, and improve on the ending as well.
thank you i will try but my pc crashed so idk if i still have the flp
simplistic, realistic, calming, and loops perfectly!
wow thanks! i wasn't sure if it was too simplistic but i think if had added more to the piece it would have ruined the pieces calming feel.
many thanks for the 10/10!
- Phat Ham out.
definite 10/10, 5/5, dled, favorited
Thank u, glad to hear that!^^
I was unaware that my music could cause sexual pressure in one's pants. I am hoping that this is a desirable effect.
for it's simplicity, too much reverb on fruity keys, and random notes just all in one pattern..
good attempt, though, keep it up!
The intro strings sound familiar.
The synth bassline's gotta go/change.
Drum's are okay (not a big fan of claps generally)
I swear I've heard the melody before! (midi, right? ;P)
Love the part at 1:40-2:03.
biggest concern here for me: the synth bassline
make it some real bass, lad!
Other than that, it was a good effort in making a tune!
thx for the detailed response. always like to get a lot of feedback.
I feel you on the bassline not having any bass to it. I can easily change that.
ya i used an midi thing from this pack and played around with it and added more tracks to make a full song. thx for the honest review again :)
Beautiful voice, great instrumental.
Thanks a lot! It makes my day to know you liked.
I like the sounds and the drums you chose, and the intro gives off a spooky type of feeling.
Some things I noticed was that it got too loud when the instruments overlapped each other and it was a big mess, as well as their was a little cut off from the pads in the intro at :16. I don't know if that was supposed to happen but it kind of ruins the mood.
Thanks for the review!
Hehe, that cutoff from the pad is from the VST. I see what you mean, thanks a bunch for pointing that out. Yea, that has always been my problem. Too many sounds overlapping. I kinda got carried away with different add ons and such, so yes, i agree, it became a mess. And that's why I've been trying to limit the number of tracks I use in my songs. Thanks for the reminder!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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