It was okay.
I can notice the different volume changes while the melody plays, as well as that kick just constantly playing in the background, which really distracts me from the main melody; the only 'main' part of the song, if you will. Other than that, nice composition, and some parts the kick really fits in, but generally it's out of place 3/4 of the time. Hope to hear more and see you improve!
Cheers,
DJ JPA