djJPA's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Better off Alone Remi-XD]

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weird pitch drop at 0:38-0:40 :/

other than that not too bad, 3/5 6/10
kinda basic, not too much to it, sounds like sytrus strings and basic sounds. try upgrading your library and making something creative/yourself!

SteNcils responds:

haha nice call.....i did use sytrus strings:)

Also the "pitch drop" ur referring to is actually my attempt to make it seem like a "Disk-off and Disk on" sorta thing....

haha idk.....i thought it would be cool?:)

thanks for ur review:D

[B7 - Psychosis Pt. 2]

class

i'll give it that

Burn7 responds:

Well... thanks? If that's all I've got, at least I've got something I suppose.

But I have to say this is a pretty useless review. You just 7'nd it and didn't even say why. I'll just have to take a guess and say it's because I have a 7 in my name.

[untitled hardstyle attempt]

awesome.

intro is unique, fades in quite well to the main riffs. and has an overall nice sound. i would improve the bassline though and the filter for when the bass comes in.

other than that, nice, oh, and improve on the ending as well.

9/10, 5/5

cheers

TheFatBunny responds:

thank you i will try but my pc crashed so idk if i still have the flp

[Witches Cauldron]

nice!

simplistic, realistic, calming, and loops perfectly!

great!

cheers

phatham responds:

wow thanks! i wasn't sure if it was too simplistic but i think if had added more to the piece it would have ruined the pieces calming feel.
many thanks for the 10/10!
- Phat Ham out.

[Innocence Lost (Demo V. 2)]

jizz

in
my
pants

EPIC

Beatcrasher responds:

I was unaware that my music could cause sexual pressure in one's pants. I am hoping that this is a desirable effect.

XxBeatcrasherxX

[Waves of Solitude]

meh..

5/10, 2/5
for it's simplicity, too much reverb on fruity keys, and random notes just all in one pattern..

good attempt, though, keep it up!

[TI:.Intense Beauty]

Pretty good.

The intro strings sound familiar.
The synth bassline's gotta go/change.
Drum's are okay (not a big fan of claps generally)
I swear I've heard the melody before! (midi, right? ;P)
Love the part at 1:40-2:03.

biggest concern here for me: the synth bassline
make it some real bass, lad!

Other than that, it was a good effort in making a tune!
4/5, 7/10.

cheers,

dj JPA

TIMarbury responds:

thx for the detailed response. always like to get a lot of feedback.

I feel you on the bassline not having any bass to it. I can easily change that.

ya i used an midi thing from this pack and played around with it and added more tracks to make a full song. thx for the honest review again :)

[You raise me up (cover)]

Amazing.

Beautiful voice, great instrumental.
5/5
10/10.
Easily.

Infernov responds:

Thanks a lot! It makes my day to know you liked.

[Initiate]

Awesome!

I like the sounds and the drums you chose, and the intro gives off a spooky type of feeling.
Some things I noticed was that it got too loud when the instruments overlapped each other and it was a big mess, as well as their was a little cut off from the pads in the intro at :16. I don't know if that was supposed to happen but it kind of ruins the mood.

5/5, 9/10

DJ-Chilvan responds:

Thanks for the review!
Hehe, that cutoff from the pad is from the VST. I see what you mean, thanks a bunch for pointing that out. Yea, that has always been my problem. Too many sounds overlapping. I kinda got carried away with different add ons and such, so yes, i agree, it became a mess. And that's why I've been trying to limit the number of tracks I use in my songs. Thanks for the reminder!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!